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    there's a violet in my bed
    that has awakened
    and wondered where I am.

    her hair is fanned out
    on the pillows
    like spilled ink.

    my violet is
    mildly sunburned,
    her thighs are
    firm and warm,
    and her center waits,
    hungers
    for me
    like I hunger
    for her.

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    woah, the sexual imagery that played in my head with this one..simply amazing..heheh..better than cinemax Crazy A...I loved your descriptions..as always...and how you once again chose the word "center" oh Yeah, that gets me every time. Excellent piece sir.

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    yes this is good.
    ___---parch

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